Guiones · AD-25
One of Four
Horse Jello
Gancho
“"This went in the bin at week five. I remember being relieved."”
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This went in the bin at week five. I remember being relieved.
Five weeks of doing it every morning, feeling nothing, and then the clean satisfaction of throwing it out and being done hoping about it.
What I didn't know is that what I'd been doing was one of four things.
One. Two. Three. Four. In that order.
The clips going around kept the first one, because the first one is the strange one, and strange is what gets watched. The other three are boring. Nobody filmed the boring ones.
So I ran a quarter of it, got nothing, and closed the file on myself.
The other three are written up below.
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Five weeks of doing it every morning, feeling nothing, and then the clean satisfaction of throwing it out and being done hoping about it.
What I didn't know is that what I'd been doing was one of four things.
One. Two. Three. Four. In that order.
The clips going around kept the first one, because the first one is the strange one, and strange is what gets watched. The other three are boring. Nobody filmed the boring ones.
So I ran a quarter of it, got nothing, and closed the file on myself.
The other three are written up below.
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Texto en pantalla
TiempoTextoFunción
0–5sweek fiveFaja fija
20–26sone of fourRevelación parcial
38–43sclosed the file on myselfAbsolución
0–5sweek fiveFaja fija
20–26sone of fourRevelación parcial
38–43sclosed the file on myselfAbsolución
Producción
Primer frame: bote cayendo dentro del cubo, plano cenital.
Escena: manos contando cuatro objetos y colocándolos en orden. Sin rostro.
Escena: manos contando cuatro objetos y colocándolos en orden. Sin rostro.
Riesgo
Riesgo«Closed the file on myself» es la línea que hace el trabajo: mueve el veredicto del producto a su cuerpo, que es lo que hay que revertir. No sustituirla por algo más suave.